User:Bryweb75/Police brutality/Willardthecat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bryweb75


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * no draft in Sandbox Draft yet
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Police brutality

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Bryweb75, please make sure to look at this peer review of this Wikipedia article for ideas for specific improvements: WikiProject Law Enforcement/Peer review/Police brutality

Lead
Interestingly, the whole article is quite long, but this lead paragraph is quite concise. I wonder if there is a more recent definition of police brutality you can find and cite here?

Content
Because of the length of the whole article, you may want to focus on improving one section, e.g., the section on North America.

Tone and Balance
Of course this is a subject that brings up strong feelings for most of us, but the information can be described in keeping with Wikipedia's neutrality policy. Does the section you are working on seem well written and balanced in coverage to you?

Sources and References
I strongly recommend checking the references/citations to make sure the links work, also look at articles in these databases https://library.csueastbay.edu/az.php?s=74831 to see if there are more current sources to cite, and they may have newer information to incorporate into the text, with appropriate citations. Are there examples beyond Breonna Taylor and George Floyd that should be mentioned in that section? I wonder if there should be a mention of changes in public opinion and the Black Lives Matter movement?

Organization
You can consider the article as a whole or just the section(s) you choose to work on, but do consider if you think it is well organized or not. I notice that not every country/region's section is organized the same way.

Images and Media

 * There are good use of images already. You can search in https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page to see if there are other images you think should be added.