User:Bs092356/Fritz Platten/Md188 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bs092356


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bs092356/Fritz Platten


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fritz Platten

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is off to a good start and seems to be from a neutral standpoint. However, there are no links associated with the article and information is not cited. I highly suggest you do that and find more information on him in general. I would like to read about his deeper presence within the communist party. There are also no pictures available for the reader to look at. However, the content that is available is easy to read and understandable. It is also well organized and split into different sections for different topics. In conclusion, the article can use a lot of work and more information about the subject as a whole.