User:Bsantiago97/Refugee crisis/JHaupt46 Peer Review

General info
(Bsantiago97)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bsantiago97/Refugee crisis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Refugee crisis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Breeze you're my hero. This is really impressive, honestly there are not a lot of strings to pull. The changes fill in gaps, expand context and add to the overall clarity to the article. The bibliography is solid and looks to expand the references to do the same. The only thing I wonder about is the scale of the additions proposed but feel the changes will absolutely go along way to updating the article.

Hi Josh,

Thank you for responding! Your peer review is the only one I have to go off of. I'm with you when it comes to the scale of the changes I want to make. I am not sure if I will get to them all or if we are required to use every source we have in our bibliographies in the wiki article. This project has been one big shot in the dark for me. I never know with certainty if I am doing what is expected of me. For instance, I am not even sure if this is where I am supposed to be responding to your peer review, but I do not know where else it would go.

Thank you for seeing my vision with my article,

Breeze