User:Bsb018/Wood duck/Devynbrandt Peer Review

General info
Bsb018
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Wood duck
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bsb018/Wood_duck?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are a few minor edits here that do provide new information to the article, but the article is already really well written. It is probably going to be difficult to add more information to this article since it is already so polished. Are you planning on adding a new section about wood ducks into this or were you just going to go over it? It seems like it would be difficult to polish it any further without being an expert on wood ducks. I didn't read too much about male wood ducks in the article, adding in their mating tendencies would be beneficial to the article. Also separating the habitat and behavior sections could help organize the article a bit more specifically. As far as the references even though you said the "fun fact" article was written by an expert it does come across a little silly due to the title and the article does seem to be biased towards wood ducks, expressive terms the author used such as "beautiful" and "always a treat to see" strike me as biased because it's clear the author is a fan of wood ducks and loves them, but it does yield some good surface level information that can get you to research further. I think fact number 10 provides things that could be added to the article under the Conservation section, the Stamp Act is not discussed in this section and could be added. Your second website added into references doesn't add any new information to the wiki page, it's still focusing on general wood duck descriptions that are already present in the article. You could get really creative with adding new sections to this page since it has all the normal stuff covered, things like parasites or diseases the ducks are highly susceptible to would be neat attributions, maybe even if there are just general health conditions wood ducks often fall ill to could be good. Have there been any weird events with wood ducks like a strange migration pattern one year or something that made news? Something small but important to add is life expectency for wood ducks, how many months does it take for a wood duck to become sexually mature and participate in mating season? Also what do the babies look like? There's no description for that. Hope this helps you add in some cool sections and find more scholarly sources! Thank you for bolding your edits!