User:Bsb018/Wood duck/Universal9449 Peer Review

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Bsb018
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bsb018/Wood duck - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Wood duck - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the first edit that this student made they added citation but this citation is added twice in this sentence and its the same one being counted as two different ones.

I like how you listed some of the species that they may need protections from, may need to link those to their respective wiki articles incase someone wants to go to those after reading this one.

I feel like the first sentence of the 2nd paragraph that was added can be mixed in with the original first sentence and doesn't need to be its own thing.

The last sentence added says "calling sometimes as high as 50 feet" instead of "falling sometimes as high as 50ft"