User:Bsgasca/Christianity and colonialism/Fatherjohnmusty Peer Review

General info
Bsgasca
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bsgasca/Christianity_and_colonialism :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Christianity and colonialism

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Fixing the tone of the article is important

- there were only 2 examples of what would be updated

- unclear on other edits made in the article, but the two examples really changed the tone and seem very necessary for the rest of the article