User:Bshein5/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Legal consciousness

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because I am a pre-law student, and am very interested in legal consciousness. The first thing I noticed about the article was the breadth of the topic and amount of ambiguity.

Evaluate the article
The lead introductory sentence helps to provide a general idea of what legal consciousness is, but it is slightly difficult to understand and is a bit of a run on sentence. It is not very concise and is quite overly detailed.

There is no content under "History of Legal Consciousness" or under "Legal Consciousness narratives". There is also a random photograph of some lions. This does not seem to be relevant to the article or topic at all.

The article does appear to be neutral, but due to the general lack of content, it is hard to provide a full analysis.

The links to other articles do work, but there should be more citations throughout the article, especially in the Definition section.

There are many run on sentences and the article in general is not very concise. The talk page agrees with me on the majority of these points, especially about the introduction.