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=Article Evaluation= I am evaluating article "Pizza" I chose this article because it's a bit more broad to see how the content is organized and in what order. The article started off with some history but dives right into modern type of pizza and there should be comparison in the first few paragraphs to establish the difference. Most of the article is relevant but what happens when you bring up only one American company and leave out the rest? I think it's better to no have any company names and just include they're style of pizza. I think the point of this article is to explain originality of the pizza and not to compare to today's pizzas because there's an article on Pizza varieties by country already. I really like the preparation part of the article but there need to be more explanation on the type of ingredients from the three regions. Overall, I think the article can be bias towards some specific company or type of company branding which can be misleading. Reference Links need to be updated. Link #19 and 23 will need to be updated.

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Economy of Fiji https://www.heritage.org/index/country/fiji http://go.galegroup.com.ccclibrary.idm.oclc.org/ps/i.do?&id=GALE|A353105990&v=2.1&u=clackamasccl&it=r&p=ITBC&sw=w

Fiji Water

Toshiya Eto

Beam bridge https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/primo-explore/fulldisplay?docid=CP71225411210001451&context=L&vid=CCC&lang=en_US&search_scope=CCC%20%20%20Summit%20%20%20Articles&adaptor=Local%20Search%20Engine&tab=everything&query=any,contains,beam%20bridges&facet=topic,include,Bridges&offset=0 https://www.britannica.com/technology/bridge-engineering/Live-load-and-dead-load#ref592381

Grana Padano

https://www.cheese.com/grana-padano/

https://www.castellocheese.com/en-us/cheese-types/hard-cheese/grana-padano/

https://www.triedandsupplied.com/saucydressings/difference-between-parmigiano-reggiano-and-grana-padano/

https://www.nydailynews.com/life-style/eats/italian-cheeses-grana-padano-parmigiana-reggiano-article-1.325070

https://vinepair.com/articles/parmesan-vs-parmigiano-reggiano-vs-grana-padano/

http://bi.galegroup.com/global/article/GALE%7CA453687223/7268ced60f01520eac91fa7ffdd2b432?u=clackamasccl