User:Btareen/2018 Fiji earthquake/Dstrafaci Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

2018 Fiji


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Btareen/2018 Fiji earthquake


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2018 Fiji earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading both your article as well as your sandbox, I think the new section you are currently drafting "Earthquake history of Fiji", not only fits well but it will also be a good addition of background history. This background information offers some more insight as to why the earthquake occurred, and also does a great job of describing the exact plate tectonics in that area. I believe you used proper sources in this as well, however, in the paragraph starting with "initially", I believe there are a few more areas where you could cite a source or two. I would also think about adding hyper-links on words such as "Indo-Australian Plate" and "Mineral Resources Department". I think adding pictures or diagrams of the previous earthquakes as well would be a great addition. Another section I think you could add to your article could be the local impact of the earthquake, if any, the economic implications, if any, and the public response of the earthquake, if any. As someone had stated in the article evaluation, the way the article is currently set up makes it look like an informational news report, so if you could add some other pieces of side information I think that would be a great addition. Overall, I think you have a pretty good template to begin with, and the evaluations as well as the history section you have started drafting look solid. Adding a few sections such as impact, economic impact and public response would also be good additions.