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The article I assigned to myself is Scoliosis. I chose this article because I personally have scoliosis and thought it would be interesting to learn more about it.

Strengths: Weaknesses: I decided to add the citation to the third paragraph in the Surgery section and paraphrased it because without that, it would be plagiarism.
 * Used mostly reliable sources when citing.
 * Touched base on the most important information about scoliosis.
 * Went into great detail under each section.
 * Some of sentences in the article need citations.
 * The Cost section needs to be updated.
 * The Evolutionary consideration section seems to be out of place or unnecessary to the article.

I also added a picture to the surgery section and moved the picture that was of an x-ray to the management section. I cited the image as well.

I would like to have contributed to the Cost section but, I could not find a reliable source.