User:Btsvtxten-/Sylvia Hoffman/Bridgetanscombe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Btsvtxten


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Btsvtxten-/Sylvia Hoffman


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content is very concise and shows her significance (notability) as a bobsledder. It has the appropriate number of sources but perhaps more could be found on her athletic career. It's the primary reason the page will exist, so having a bit more may be beneficial to readers. The page does not have any images yet but perhaps one could be inserted to make up for having less written content (only if one is available under wiki guidelines, of course). The structure is good and everything is written neutrally.