User:Btymoniewicz/William Pickens/Nrust10 Peer Review

Hey, sorry, I thought I had posted this but I actually just left it in my sand box I think. Anyway...

I think the lead could be improved, however this is among a few things that I think should be worked on. The lead could be expanded and feature a more descriptive description of the subject (William Pickens). I do think that the content added is relevant, up to date, and of high quality. I think that the page adheres to all of the Wikipedia guidelines and standards. Overall the only problem I see beyond the lead is a lack of tweaking and fine tuning in the structure of the page, however with the content I think that it is clear that this is being addressed and if given more time, the page will come together. The sources and the information is good and I think falls into line very well.