User:Buck baker/sandbox

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Louisiana State University is located in Baton Rouge, Louisiana. LSU is the home of Mike the tiger.

I would like to help copyedit the article Sega. There are non-existent links that need to be removed. Also, I would like to restructure a bias in the article. Grammar usage could be altered slightly as well.
 * Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:48, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

The article Centre for Forest Research is in need of better citation.
 * This article is very short (a stub, really). You'd need to significantly expand it if you want to add four sources. Feel free to do so, or choose a longer article that needs sources. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:48, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Instead of copyediting Sega, I have decided to change my article to Brick Haley after speaking to my professor.
 * Your edits were good, but should remove the comma from "coaching outside linebackers for one season each at Clemson, (1998) and at Houston (1997)" in the "Early Career" section. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:00, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Brick Haley Sources
My first source: GENE SAPAKOFF. Post and Courier, The (Charleston, SC), February 20, 1998 C PC, p. 3 4pp, Database: NewsBank - Archives My second source: JERRY HILL; Tribune-Herald assistant sports, editor. "Brick Haley; Baylor aide headed to Georgia Tech; Haley cleans out office, will be named to Gailey's defensive staff on Monday." Waco Tribune-Herald (TX) 09 Feb. 2002: NewsBank - Archives. Web. 12 Feb. 2015. My third source: Ezra, Siegel. "Texas adds Jeff Traylor, Brick Haley to football staff." Daily Texan, The: University of Texas at Austin (TX) 13 Feb. 2015: NewsBank. Web. 20 Feb. 2015. My fourth source: RANDY, ROSETTA. "Report: Cooper, Haley to join LSU staff." Advocate, The (Baton Rouge, LA) 06 Jan. 2009: NewsBank. Web. 20 Feb. 2015.
 * Apparently Brick Haley got a new job once again. Someone already update the article. It appears that you'll just be supplying sources for his previous positions, so you should be fine. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:02, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Nice work adding the sources. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:05, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead Article
I will be working on Prince of Prestige Academy to help work on the lead of that article.

Although I see a good bit of information to work with, the obvious place to begin with would be to create a lead article since one does not exist. I also would like to structure the page so that the "history" article is before the "administration" article (or tie the administration article into the lead article all together). The page also reads very much like a persuasive piece, and would like to rewrite some the jargon so that it comes off more educational instead of a sales pitch.
 * This looks like a worthy project if you're comfortable with such a short article. An article this short shouldn't really have sections. Unless you plan on expanding it, you can simply consolidate all the information into the lead and get rid of the TOC and remaining sections. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:02, 23 February 2015 (UTC)