User:Buffy0123/Prototype theory/Davmca97 Peer Review

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Hey, I like where your article is going and the changes your are making. Have a few ideas to try and help.
The section about Guy Deutscher is very informative, but may be a bit long. I would try and focus on what he did and his findings rather than the examples used to show what happened. I like the use of examples in your later sections about arrival and newspeak and they make a good addition to the article. I found some grammar mistakes that you just have to reread through and find, nothing serious. For the most part you keep a neutral tone, I would just try to avoid things like "strong example" and rather use just "example". Make sure to add the citations for your new sections and maybe a picture of Guy Deutscher in his section, if you can find one.