User:BunBun007/Kinin/167B Peer Review

General info
BunBun007
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Kinin
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: the lead has fulfilled all the above from the guiding questions. The work is concise and straight to the point.

content: all the content and information added was relevant to the topic. There is no content missed or anything that doesn't correlate with the topic.

Tone and Balance: The content in general is neutral, and well balanced. Nothing was overrepresented or underrepresented. Overall it was very clear.

Sources and reference: the sources were accurate and they were all found in reliable website, they were coming from journals and were peer reviewed.

organization: very clear, easy to understand the idea. Its broken down into sections and right categories.

Images and media: This article doesn't contain any images regarding the topic, it will be nice to add some if is made available.

Overall impression: Everything is well organized, very detailed and clear.