User:BundlesofRoses013/Charon/Bella088 Peer Review

the article is remarkable, they seem to have everything you need and more on this page i cant not seem to come up with any criticism except maybe some grammer things other then that they have so much information and detail and have provided imagery and has given plenty of sourse that are legitamit and have backed up all of there information. all of the information is relivent to the topic and everything is up to date. also all of the cotent is near perfect to what is needed.

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