User:BunniFlores74/sandbox

Log
October 3: Copied section for revision. Working on expansion and information beyond pollution

October 17: clarifying sources and adding revised edits. Brainstorming format options for adding a new section as well as revising the old one

Needs; more on the sanctuaray itself not just the pulp mill. Revision from notes into article and combination with previous work. Previous sources checked, all dead links. Adding new ones with fresh info Links do work, I've checked them all. Maybe it's your computer? I can sent screenshots of all of my links opening.

Heather's Comments
10/2- Good work! This is how the Sandbox should start looking. Be sure to watch the video in Introduction to Week 5 if you haven't yet. Are the sources below ones you have found or are they from the original article? Clarify next week in the log and let me know if you reached out to Rachel, our reference librarian, through Inbox, or need other help finding sources. Keep it up!

10/15- Nice job with edits below! I recommend changing the first line to omit "crucial to the protection" and just start with Many native waterbird species flourish here, including 199 species. You have to keep the tone neutral. What's next? Are you going to revise the "Pollution Controversy" section? Or add a new section based on what you've found out?

10/25- Good! I've left edits for you in italics for paragrpah 2 below. Of course, if you don't have any sources for this info. you can't use them. And right now, I can't read #2 at all and #1 and #3 need to be in complete formatting (author's name, title, etc...). See if this refresher will help you. If not, I or a Wikitech can walk you through it. So for next week, un-italicize my revisions if you like them and link sources to what's below. :)

Article I'm Editing:
'''This sanctuary is provides a home for many native waterbird species to flourish, and contains roughly 119 species of birds alone.{2,5} despite being a nature sanctuary for the state of chile under the National Monuments Act  it wasnt internationally recognized for its cultural and natural value until the Ramsar Wetlands Convention of 1971. {1} The concervation effort promoted collaboration between chile (CONAF) and mexico (CONANP) for protecting the wetlands {3} The River Cruces and Chorocamayo Nature Sanctuary Management Plan was instated in 2016 by CONAF with financing help from the Ramsar Convention. {1}'''

'''In 2004, the Valdivia Pulp Mill was opened in San José de la Mariquina located 25 km (16 mi) northeast^ of the preserve^ near ^the^ Cruces River..The emblematic Black-necked Swans started at that time to die and migrate. {1}'''

=
'''In 2004 ecologists and people from the university UACh in Valdivia accused the forestry enterprise CELCO of polluting the river. Swan autopsies revealed that their deaths were due to high levels of iron and dangerous metals in the water. The pulp mill was forced to close while the case was investigated. [1] Even in 2006, the Latin American water tribunal recommended closing down the mill [2][3].'''====== '''As of November 2008, the case against CELCO was still being debated in court. In the mean time, other hypotheses have been proposed to explain the dramatic decrease of the swan's population.[4]'''

Source 1; http://www.conaf.cl/cerca-de-90-personas-asistieron-a-la-segunda-cuenta-publica-del-santuario-carlos-anwandter/

Source 2; file:///C:/Users/user/Downloads/063.036.0408.pdf

Source 3; http://www.conaf.cl/?s=carlos+anwandter

Source 4; http://awsassets.panda.org/downloads/final_wwf_rio_cruces_report_english.pdf

Source 5; https://www.worldwildlife.org/press-releases/pulp-mill-devastates-swans-sanctuary-in-chile

https://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2005/11/051125110150.htm