User:Bunny322/Allosexual/Valerie and her week of wonders Peer Review

General info
Bunny322
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Allosexuality
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * The lead is very clear, concise and easy to read
 * The lead provides a good introduction to the major ideas explored in the entirety of the article

Content:


 * The content added by the user is very relevant to the article's topic


 * The user provides in depth explanations on the topic, exploring its history and relationship with society and culture

Tone:


 * The tone of the article is neutral, the user does not provide a biased view towards the topic

Sources:


 * the sources are relevant and up to date.

Overall:


 * Great article! very clear, concise and easy to follow.
 * The content contributed by the user is very relevant and up to date.
 * The only suggestion I have is to include some images, perhaps the Allosexual flag.