User:Burke2jf/sandbox

"Article Evaluation" Some sentence structure and word choice during the evaluation of the article was misplaced and sort-of choppy. After giving an overall outline of the litigations of concussions in the NFL only one was expanded upon directly while the rest were just mentioned. As well as some of the programs such as "HIT" where not expanded upon properly or in detail. Some information about the article about testimonies given by Roger Goodell where removed while they should have been kept because of their large part in the following litigations in the BFL on concussion protocol. Lastly, the information isn't deep enough or recent enough for a true research proposal.