User:Burreaux5/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Non-consensual condom removal

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because it is a non-sensual sexual practice that appears to fly under the radar. It matters because while the victim did not consent to sex without functioning condoms, the perpetrator knowingly removes or damages the condom. This behaviour is harmful to victims as they are exposed to potential sexually transmitted infections or are at greater risk of becoming pregnant, even though they had only consented to having sex using condoms. My preliminary impression of the article was that it appeared to be well-structured with the contents being organized in a logical manner.

Evaluate the article
The lead section was brief, yet informative as it explained what the article was about without going into too much detail. The article's tone remained neutral without presenting the facts in a way that favoured a certain viewpoint. The impact and risks section did not go into as much detail as it could have. Finding sources that provide more details for this section would be helpful for this topic. The structure of the article itself makes sense and is presented in a logical manner. The addition of images would be very helpful as there are none present in the article. This could help to engage readers more and enhance their understanding.

The talk page discussed how this article had been merged with the reproductive coercion article previously. This is no longer the case due to the difference in motive between stealthing and reproductive coercion. Another conversation that occurred was about whether or not this needed to be its own article due to Wikipedia's policy on neologism. This article is rated C-class, low-importance by three different WikiProjects: sexology and sexuality, crime, and medicine/reproductive medicine.

Overall this article has a good starting framework and structure, but requires more detail in certain sections and images, if possible. Further research about this topic will likely aid the quality of this article.