User:Butterflies26/Ego ideal/Johnduffy23 Peer Review

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This article does a good job of providing a detailed and comprehensive insight of ego ideal, or the inner image of oneself as one wants to become. It is very well organized, and uses a signifigant amount of sources to support the evidence. The sources you used are all easily accessible, and you also created a well thought out overview of your topic. You also do a great job of presenting information in a neutral tone and remaining unbiased. Overall I thought this was very well done to the point where it's difficult for me to come up with any suggestions for improvement. One idea might be to include some background context of maybe why ego ideal is so important, and how it can apply to our lives on a more personal matter. But then again, it would be difficult to do so using a scholarly source and remaining unbiased and neutral. Either way your work was very interesting to read and I really enjoyed learning about this. Good Job!