User:Butterflies26/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
( Ego ideal)

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article because it is a topic that has become present in today's world, for example what people are wishing to become but haven't yet. Social media has a very strong influence in the ego ideal because it shows people what they should aspire to be. After learning in my communication class that life is fractal, the ego ideal is part of it and it's not about what we want to become or the inner ideal image of oneself is about what we are now and what we want to continue to be, what's important, and should matter to us. And because I want to know myself and who I am, I choose this article to start learning from my inner self and provide the information to people who find themself in the same position as me.

Evaluate the article.
I feel that the first few sentences of the article should start with the topic name and not where the term is coming from that is in my understanding and information that should come after mentioning the main/leading topic of the article as whole. The first sentence of the lead section of this article is understandable, however, it could be clearer for a person that wants a quick definition of the main topic. The article has all the major sections organized in order with briefly descriptions of them at the beginning of each paragraph. In the talk section of the article there are not comments about edits and contributions that some people have made, furthermore, the article is consider low importance. The article is hard to read because of all information that are mix together, there is so much to improve in this article and much information to add in a clear, organized and concise way.