User:Buzzancam1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Poseidon

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I enjoy learning about Greek mythology. My first impression was that the article goes into great detail on the Greek god.

Evaluate the article
While I enjoyed reading this article on Poseidon, I do have a few suggestions.


 * I think it would be helpful for readers to know more information about Kronos. Why did he swallow his children? Why did Rhea save Zeus? What was Poseidon’s position in all of this?
 * I would also suggest adding more information regarding the Walls of Troy section. I believe that going into more depth in this section would enhance the reader’s understanding of Poseidon’s importance during the Trojan War.
 * I would suggest that you subdivide the "Painting" section and expand on each subsection. Here are some suggestions:
 * For the military section, what exactly do the weapons named after Poseidon do? Is there more information on their specific functions?
 * There are many great images and paintings on the side of the article, therefore I do not think that you need a gallery section.
 * If you want to keep the gallery section, I would elaborate on the importance of the specific artworks you chose.

Overall, I think that the article’s content is relevant to the topics, as well as you kept a neutral stance. Your sources are thorough and the article is well organized.