User:Buzzancam1/Literacy Crisis/Bacarellam1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Buzzancam1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Buzzancam1/Literacy_Crisis?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Over all, the article is impressive in its well rounded nature. However in certain sections the information come across and person and possibly biased in sections such as "how to fix the crisis" By changing the format this information is given and using more of a neutral writing style it would fix this problem. I liked the inclusion of the Covid 19 impact and the race gaps to keep it up to date. Some of the pictures are smaller and difficult to read but enlarging them is suggested.