User:Bxwalsh/Andy Jankowiak/Rezwanas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bxwalsh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bxwalsh/Andy_Jankowiak?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Andy Jankowiak

Evaluate the drafted changes
Bxwalsh did well adding relevant information to the section of the article about the racer's personal life. The statements were unbiased and no superlatives were used. I believe all the viewpoints were equally represented. All of the links work and the support the claims made in the article. There are some citations. However, the first one could be placed at the end of the sentence since all the information it presents is from that source. The second, fourth, and last statements need a source so the facts are verified. One small thing is that in the second statement, the names of the mother, father and uncle is redundant since the first statement already mentioned them. You can put "Jankowiak's uncle" right before "Tommy's pit crew" in the first statement so you don't have to repeat in the following sentence. It's also better to use the person's last name to refer to them as it is more formal and the article refers to him with his last name as well. Overall, the information is relevant and offers valuable insight into Jankowiak's personal life. I commend your ability to include unbiased statements.