User:Byrdwr/Wayne Henderson/Whart423 Peer Review

Lead:

The lead has been updated to reflect the new content added.

It includes good introductory sentences.

The lead has good summary of major sections.

The lead has good new information that was not formerly present in this article.

It is concise and to the point.

Content:

The new content added is relevant.

The content is up to date.

There is no content missing.

Wayne does not seem to be extra privileged anyway, so this is irrelevant to the subject. No.

Tone and Balance:

The content added is neutral.

The claims on Wayne Henderson are not biased.

No, all the viewpoints are evenly represented.

The article does not attempt to persuade the reader in any way, other than the facts.

Sources and References:

The new content is backed up by reliable sources.

The content did closely resemble what the cited sources say.

The sources are thorough.

The sources are current and not outdated.

The selection of sources is as diverse as it's going to be with someone like Wayne Henderson.

I have searched the whole database for sources on Wayne Henderson, and there are no better options than the ones that Will Byrd made.

All links that were added are functional.

Organization:

Yes, everything was clear and easy to read.

There are no grammatical or spelling errors.

It is also well organized.

Overall Impressions:

The editor added great quality to the article, and is more complete with the new revisions.

The articles strengths include accuracy of the topic.

The only way to improve the revision of this article is to add more content to it.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Byrdwr)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Wayne Henderson (luthier)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wayne Henderson (luthier)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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