User:C.Chung, Future PharmD/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Health survival paradox

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article since our group will be updating it. Evaluating this article will allow me to identify the areas that should be updated.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is very concise, but may be too sparse and not clear enough in defining the topic and significance. The body of the article is written in a neutral perspective, but could be better organized for readers to follow. There are no images present. Overall, this article lacks information that directly relates to each identified subtopic. There is also some incoherence in some section that can be omitted.