User:C00l Muffinz/Pearl Frush/Angiegarciaa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

C00l Muffinz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:C00l Muffinz/Pearl Frush


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pearl Frush

Evaluate the drafted changes
As we all found ourselves figuring out how to add information to the wikipedia page and gather information about our topic I think it's important to use structured sentences, I see you have place information about your topic and I think that developing them could be useful for you. Display and probably get some organization going with the article. The information that the article has so far it's not that well structured and I think you could create divisions or timelines for it by adding headings or subheadings. Good reference page, if you could grab key information about your topic and display it on your page that would make your article stronger.