User:C00l Muffinz/Pearl Frush/Unclebenny 713 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

C00l Muffinz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:C00l%20Muffinz/Pearl_Frush?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Pearl Frush

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This is a good start. The lead hasn't been worked on yet but the article body has a good start at bullet pointing information, but needs to be more developed with additional information such as the artist's personal life and artistic methods. Conciseness is also important to add. Also important to expand upon the views and perspectives of women artists during this time period. The resource featured is an excellent source which ties into the topic seamlessly. Including more references and citations to the article can enforce credibility. Relevant works and projects should be included to add more visual flair. Looking past those potential changes, this is shaping up to be a strong article.