User:C0URTwals/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.)

Nina Sobell Talk:Nina Sobell

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

This article is not well developed and is in the starting class rating. I just thought it would give me a good thing that I could really dive deep to evaluate it.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * Things said in the article all seem relevant.
 * The thing that distracts me is the sentences sometimes feel choppy and like they don't go together in a flowing structed way.
 * The latest date they talk about her in is 2021 so I feel like it has been updated and not out of date. Although maybe more things could be added about her recent work.
 * I think the last few sentences in the career heading seem to be worded in way that could be taken as biased.
 * Sources seem to support what is said in the article, from what I looked at. And come from a good range of sources. To improve, there needs to be more sources added, not many are cited.
 * It is rated as Starting and is not part of wiki projects.