User:CAPam30/Sport communication careers/SmokeyJoe77 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CAPam30


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CAPam30/Sport_communication_careers?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport communication careers

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

-lead is good, solid additions to add just a little more depth to the article. Good job

Content

-good and helpful additions to the article.

-worded very well

-covered many areas of interest, including potential content gap areas

-good relevant additions

-I like your topic sentences for each section

Tone and Balance

-you did a good job at presenting the new content in a non-biased way

-good job representing multiple sources

Sources and References

-sources are relatively recent and relevant

-reliable sources

-used a variety of sources

Organization

-great organization, I think your additions will work very well in the sections they are being added to.

-topic sentences for each section do a good job at laying out the info to come

Images and Media

-no images or media