User:CB8783/Rose Rand/Erinkluge Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CB8783


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CB8783/Rose_Rand?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rose Rand

Evaluate the drafted changes
Just looked over your Sandbox and the article itself, all I can say is add more from the actual article to beef it up! :)