User:CB8783/Rose Rand/Mratner20 Peer Review

General info
CB8783
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CB8783/Rose_Rand?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rose_Rand

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job! Try to write the citations with hyperlinks so it could be visible what information you changed and which you did not.

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)