User:CCEagle17/Jacobo Arenas/Jxl1734 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CCEagle17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:CCEagle17/Jacobo Arenas
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jacobo Arenas

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

It doesn't appear you added anything, but I'd suggest adding at least a little something to the lead. I am unfamiliar with FARC, and a basic introduction to what it is without having to refer to the full wikipedia page would be helpful. It just needs some context.

Content

As mentioned above, you mention FARC and then don't provide much context to someone like me, who is largely unfamiliar with the organization. It is true that we can click to the larger page for a more detailed explanation, but a basic introduction would be nice. That said, most of the information here is about FARC and not Arenas himself. We have little to no biographical information on him, which seems to be a key piece of information missing. Further, how did he get involved with FARC to begin with? If that information is available, it seems important as well.

The additions you made are great and definitely made the article more comprehensive, but overall, it just needs more.

Sources and References

I'm not sure of the reliability of "InSight Crime" as a source, but I would look into finding something a bit more academic to source. Otherwise, everything else seems pretty credible in my opinion.

Overall Impression

From a grammar and writing standpoint, you're missing some key punctuation and sentence structure. An extra run through would probably help a lot. Outside of that, I think your additions really helped and I look forward to reading the entire piece upon completion.