User:CCEagle17/Jacobo Arenas/Mbm002 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CCEagle17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:CCEagle17/Jacobo Arenas
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jacobo Arenas

Evaluate the drafted changes
- There does not seem to be a lead section for this article, so it would probably be good to add one.

- The added part on the importance of Arenas to the FARC works well as a separate section, good organization. The section seems to be quite complete and have good information with sources to back it up. Maybe you could add a sentence or two at the beginning on what the FARC is or link it to the article. The section is concise, clear, and well-written. The information is balanced, unbiased and neutral.

- The added information about his death is useful in conjunction with the section on the FARC. The first sentence took me rereading to understand what you went so maybe change it a bit to be like "After the death of Arenas, he was never..."

- Overall the contributions were good, if you have more information on him apart from the FARC that would be helpful.