User:CCNorthfield/Chickasaw/Redalligator3 Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing the work of CCNorthfield. The sandbox draft I am reviewing is linked with the username.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The article currently looks like this.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

There is some good content added in the sandbox to update the lead. The lead section they are trying to update falls under the section titled "Tribal Lands" and the subsection titled "United States Relations." The lead content added in the sandbox seems to be talking about Chickasaw relations with the US government in the 20th century and mentions a removal of Chickasaw. There is not enough content here to say much more about the lead as it needs to be expanded upon.

Content:

The proposed changes to the Chickasaw article are meaningful as they have found weak points of the original article. For example, they added information about the origins of the Chickasaw people, which is pretty lacking in the original article, as the original just says that they have an unclear origin. So this proposed change helps to clarify that. This information seems to be cited but this section could use more citations.

There is also some very good content regarding the first contact between the Chickasaw and the Spanish in the 1500s. They use multiple citations from recent scholarship and I believe that they have addressed another weak point in the original article.

There is also a mention of a lawsuit between the Chickasaw and the US government that is also some important information.

I think the most important thing to do to improve the article would be just to add more content to the proposed sections, in particular, the section on the first contact with the Spanish and the origins of the Chickasaw, with some more citations probably needed.