User:CCroft13/Coaching psychology/LaneMaher1 Peer Review

I really like the ideas that you presented and how you organized them onto your page. The break down of the four ideas and different styles was a great touch that provided enough depth but also wasn't stringent and long. I like the fact you provide a picture as well with some ideas behind it. Very well done.

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