User:CDLR50/Identity (social science)/Deezytings Peer Review

General info
CDLR50
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CDLR50/Identity_%28social_science%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Identity (social science)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems as though only a single word was added for the lead, however the sentence as a whole does explain the topic. It is organized very well, however I wonder if there is discussion to be had about how individuals value the types of identities. Adding this in may add equity gaps into the conversation. The portion of immigration and identity does an excellent job of opening the door to this. The tone is neutral and informative. There is a variety of references, however they do lack a date. There is no media but inserting one could help to expand the basis of the topic.