User:CEPayne/Chionoecetes/Emily.irvin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CEPayne


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CEPayne/Chionoecetes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chionoecetes

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought the lead was good, but would consider rewording the sentencing on classification to have a better flow. Additionally, you could expand on what it means to be in the Crustacea class, instead of just listing other species that fall into that class. In terms of the body of the article, I think the content is relevant and up to date, but maybe consider formatting it into a mix of shorter bullet points and paragraphs. I think the content you've added is good, is helping to complete the article, without having any issues of tone or balance.