User:CEROES/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cricothyrotomy

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Evaluating as possible article to edit as it has been rated as a "start-class" article with mid-importance.

Evaluate the article
Lead section – mentions "this technique is only intended to be a temporizing measure until a definitive airway can be established," yet there is no discussion in the article regarding what comes AFTER a cricothyrotomy.

Content – there is more content regarding the procedure's appearance in popular media than there is on the actual procedure itself.

Tone and Balance – neutral, unbiased tone.

Sources and References – two secondary sources, others are primary sources or random web pages

Organization and writing quality – section entitled "Needle cricothyrotomy" is in the incorrect section (should be under "Procedure").

Imaging and media – image shows pertinent anatomy and surgical incisions

Talk page discussion – discussions around 1) irrelevant discussions pertaining to the legality of procedure, and 2) the accuracy and necessity of including so many examples of the procedure in popular media

Overall impression – good overview of procedure, could definitely use more information from high-quality sources