User:CFB1019/Developmental Origins of Health and Disease/Arbiddy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Teecuee, Jocedye, Octhrift, Mjteague34, Lsmoses, Syeda22af, Alexcrocker12345, Blazer BG


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CFB1019/Developmental_Origins_of_Health_and_Disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental Origins of Health and Disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
This group is starting a new Wikipedia page. I like the use of 'Origin' as the lead section, and the group provides a good background on the topic.

I recommend refraining from using an acronym before defining what it means. Also, the amount of detail in the lead section warrants several references. It is factual in nature and not subjective.

The content is relevant but dated, especially with this topic being constantly advanced with new technology. The topics are relevant but will, of course, benefit from more examples beyond cardiovascular disease and metabolic disorders. For flow, it might not be necessary to include ancillary details, like where the study was conducted at or the journal cited (especially since that aspect is found in the references).

Up-to-date and exhaustive sources will bolster this page; I am sure there are several reviews out there. Also, there is an entire chapter in the textbook covering this information, so that would be a good starting point for citations since 2000. More reviews are needed for the Wikipedia notability requirements.

Lastly, an image would be helpful and could encapsulate this topic.