User:CFB1019/Developmental Origins of Health and Disease/Kmb24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CFB1019


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:CFB1019/Developmental Origins of Health and Disease - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental Origins of Health and Disease - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is a great start to say that the article needs to be further developed and the origin sections needs to be properly cited. However, what exact examples should be added to further develop the article? What exact sentences are lacking sufficient citations? I think you are off to a good start, but exactly what needs to be added/fixed needs to be determined. Additionally, the last section pasted shows quotation marks at the end of a sentence, yet there are no citations. Also, it does not show any beginning quotations. Identifying where citations are needed to be added/fixed and finding sources to use for the citations is needed.