User:CFB1019/Developmental Origins of Health and Disease/Maragon13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CFB1019


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CFB1019/Developmental_Origins_of_Health_and_Disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental Origins of Health and Disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since origin and references were the only thing included in your article I think it is great that you opened up with examples of health and disease. One of your resources is Dr. Gillman and his work was actually going to be one of the resources I would suggest using because of the extent amount of work. I think continuing to add more resources would make for an even stronger article.