User:CGstarecu/Métis Art/MuseumHours Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CGstarecu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Métis Art
 * Métis Art

Evaluate the drafted changes
On Lead:

-first sentence is too general. Maybe reference the lead in Inuit art to figure out how to word it more specifically and what kinds of topics to link to.

-confused about what the second sentence is supposed to mean: 'and more traditional-styled Métis art'?

On Forms:

I like what you laid out here. Maybe some image accompaniment may help in this section as well as in the lead.

On Themes:

I think this section can be merged with the lead section as it covers the general idea behind Métis art.

On Notable Artists:

Great selection of artists so far but I don't think you need to describe their practice as the link already does that, especially when you hover over it. I would just focus on generating a list of Métis artists to link to. Also, regarding the formatting-- I'm not sure how to do this myself but I think the line spacing should be smaller in between the artists.

Overall:

Great selection of sources, though I would like to see the citations used. Strongest section so far is the 'Forms' section. Though it is a lot of research, I think starting a history section would be beneficial to the overall topic. Maybe do some research on huge exhibitions focusing or including Métis art. For an art-focused page, I think imagery is necessary. The creation of this article is like planting a seed that will bloom an amazing page!