User:CJS77/Cancel culture/Kristienaire Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Arw212


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cancel culture - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked how you gave a good explanation of what cancel culture is. you added very good InSite on different movements that were happening. the different sources that you had really supported the message you were trying to convey and did a really good Job of educating readers on "Cancel culture" further than what is already known about the topic. Out of the whole page i thought that you adding in the critics for others as well as their reactions also expands the readers point of view from the topic. you had a really good mix of secondary and educational resources. your tone through out the paper was not only educational but also put in a way a person that is just learning of it finds it understandable. the way you transitioned from topic to topic is one big thing in papers because the next topic is what backs up the previous one and they all flowed really well. one thing I think your paper is missing is visionary, i think if you added images of these movements it would give people an idea of what you are talking about past the links to this movements. i think your bibligorapy was written really well with breif information on why you chose these sites,