User:CJessica/Andrew Ewald/Kirklandcb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kirklandcb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Andrew Ewald


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is very well organized and easy to follow. The tone is neutral. There are not any grammatical errors and had information cited. I would suggest adding some information about this Person birth year, childhood, or any other background information before their career.