User:CJmac6/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Conor McGregor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because he is my favorite UFC fighter of all time, I have watched him for years. This article matters to me to make sure his page is accurate. My first impression was they did a pretty good job with his background information and up to date pictures

Evaluate the article
Looking at the introduction on Conor McGregor's wiki page, overall everything is accurate and well said with initial background and a sense of who he is. The content was good, whoever wrote this did a good job with staying on track into Conor's early life up to his career. On the other hand the tone and balance is leaning a little against him, with bringing up his past problems with the law. I get that could be important or something that a person is well known for but he is known for fighting and coming from nothing. I would have left that part out that is a little to personal for me, maybe because I have followed him for years and have a different look at him than some people. Sources and resources was pretty good, every sentence I read I am pretty sure had a secondary source to back their claims up. The images could have been better considering McGregor is a UFC fighter and future hall of famer. Most of the pictures were of him in his usual suits that he wears but no pictures of him fighting or holding his titles. These were historic events with the PPV money coming in, he broke records multiple times of how many people tuned in to watch him fight. He was a 2 time champ in different weight classes there should be a picture of that on there. Overall it is a good and accurate article