User:CLS1111/The Dancing Girl (short story)/Zrbelleisle Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) CLS1111


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CLS1111/The_Dancing_Girl_%28short_story%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Article

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The sandbox is empty so I will review the actual article at this time.


 * 1) The article does a good job introducing the story and giving a small amount of background information on it.
 * 2) One thing that can be improved about the lead is possibly finding some more information on the story to add, instead of inserting information on two separate stories. Focus more on the story the page is dedicated to.
 * 3) The plot summary is relatively short, so I feel like it can be expanded to give readers some more information on the story.
 * 4) Many articles for stories have a section for the characters and a brief description of them. Adding this could be helpful to the article.
 * 5) Has this story won any awards or had any adaptations made of it? If it has these could be added to the article to make it a bit more well rounded on the topic.
 * 6) Currently the article only uses 2 sources. Finding more sources will help ensure the validity of what is said within the article as well as give more information to add to the article.