User:CSUSBKale/User:Cris93sand/Rafael Cardenas (artist)/CSUSBKale Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Cris93sand


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cris93sand/Rafael Cardenas (artist)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Cris93sand/Rafael Cardenas (artist)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you're doing a great job on your article. All of the information you proved is relevant to the topic. Although your lead section is concise, I think that it could do a better job at telling us what the body of your article is going to be about. Consider briefly going over some of his most notable work instead of his latest work. Your article has a neutral tone, simply stating objective facts and you have references to back up your information. The biography section has a lot of useful information but it seems to cover his life prior to becoming an artist more than his art career. Your article could go into depth more about his artwork. What pieces is he known for? Your links all work which is great. Your artist is notable enough to meet wikipedia's notability requirements so good job.

The structure of your article is easy to understand and navigate. The lead section could do a better job at reflecting the useful information about the topic, especially what he is most known for. Overall you're doing a good job creating this article.