User:CSU ZOO/Evaluate an Article

his is where I will evaluate my article.

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the Chow Chow paage.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article becasue I am wanting to work with different types of dogs and thought this would be something good to evaluate for future people that either wish to work with this breed or to have it as a family pet.

Evaluate the article
Beginning to read this article we notice that the intro paragraph is just a small summary of the apperence section. I do also believe that there could be more said about its history. For example it could talk about the intentions in breaeding a dog like this. I think that they could put the appereance and the color section together instead of having them be split by the temperment section. This will help make it not jump around when sections can be combined. The health section is a little small. It could use some description of what these diseases are and how to avoid them. The notable owners section is good but it would be better if we were able to find where these people talk about the ups in having a chow instead of just saying who had them and how many they owned. The pictures need to be cited but other than that they had great variation and showed the breed off well. Lastly, the refrences seem to all be crredible sources and in order from which they were used on the page. Overall I believe that this page is very good. It does need some critiques but overall I believe it could be a class A article.